Some cities are growing large. What are the reasons and consequences?
Nowadays, the ever-increasing number of cities is growing larger and larger. This leads to many surrounding merits and demerits surrounding this problem. In this essay, I will discuss why some cities need to be larger and the results of this issue.
There are a plethora of compelling reasons to make cities bigger day by day. Firstly, having a job or stable job is one of the most prominent causes to survive. The ever-increasing number of people struggle seeking a job in any countryside so they want to move to cities which they can be offered more jobs. Taking Vietnam as an example, more than 65% of people want to move to cities because it is hard to find any job where they live. Secondly, everyone can enhance their living by moving to cities, especially the big cities in any developing countries. Individuals can easily find a more convenient life. A growing population rate leads to the growing cities.
On the other hand, this problem leads to various consequences which are adverse. The main culprit in this problem is that more and more people move to urbans. Due to the fact that everyone has their own private vehicles from which can emit exhaust fumes. Therefore, the challenge of growing large cities is to have more and more polluted air. In addition, the amount of wastes will dump millions of tonnes of toxic wastes into lakes, rivers and oceans. There will have an adverse impact on individuals' daily lives.
In conclusion, I ponder that the competent authorities and governments need to levy a heavy tax to prevent people from moving any metropolises unless people have to face a series of environmental issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to seek'.
Suggestion: to seek
...er-increasing number of people struggle seeking a job in any countryside so they want t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87857142857 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67646583908 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546428571429 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5738575874 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3529411765 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178363950595 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562627322903 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657543568054 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869875179615 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051357198977 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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