In some cities, there are few controls on the design and construction of homes and other buildings, and owners can decide on the style of their houses. Do the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks?
Nowadays, to concept the building by masses own preferences without strict assessments regarding to the design and construction is the policy of several metropolitan area. there are several benefits and drawbacks for this interesting topic, however, I consent to be more disadvantageous sides which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, in my stand point, constructing the own building without strict regulation could lead the building to be more vulnerable to be destroy. Not only due to the material used but also the consideration of land where the building is build are the main case of the housing accident. Subsequently, such home is unsafe to be inhabited especially in the area which often occurs natural disaster. Furthermore, if the regulations are not strict, the hotel owners tended to construct a building without consideration about the environment such as road. In terms of the cost, the hotel is built without parking are; limited of space, resulting the visitors park their vehicle on the road; traffic jam would happen.
On the flip side, perhaps, the benefit from this issue is the owner could construct their own house in the minimum cost. This occurs since the more unstrict the building regulation is, the higher probability to construct as their financial capacity. Regarding the cost, they could just purchase material without thinking about the building consultant cost. In addition, the complicated regulation would lead the official to be nepotism and corrupt. In conjunction with the permission, corporate would try to do illegal way towards authority in order to attain their objectives without obeying the policy.
To sum up, imposing a few regulations regarding how the way individuals construct their own building bring several merits in some extend. Hence, I would claim that the long-term incapability to be dwelled and resulting environment problem are apparently its demerits.
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- In some cities there are few controls on the design and construction of homes and other buildings and owners can decide on the style of their houses Do the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, well, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35620915033 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95297018159 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2450289456 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.071428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208180865058 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729761181702 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527256183307 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125820451075 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241126221074 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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