Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rate. some believe that having more police on the streets is best way to reduce and combat crime. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The increase in crime rate has been becoming a troubling issue in the majority of countries. Although some believe that seeing more police on the beat is the most efficient way to tackle this problem, by considering all aspects of this issue, I personally disagree with this notion because of several grounds, which I will examine in detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Some people, especially families which have children or juveniles at home, say that they would have a sense of security if they saw the street being fully policed. According to their idea, police are responsible for monitoring and controlling gangs in order to protect their youngsters once they want to showcase their autonomy and independence only under peer pressure. In fact, police have the responsibility to bring security outside the home and parents do so inside.
However, in my opinion, the increasing rate of crime is not just because of the increase in delinquencies. Based on the statistics published by the International Police in 2019, cyber crime takes a prominent part in the crime rate. In other words, today, criminals might be the chic people we can see regularly on the streets, but they are originally the managers of fraudulent companies which sell counterfeit products on the Internet or those who launder money online. Therefore, I think improving the number of police officers on the street, who are not capable of recognizing or tracking undetectable law-breakers, would not be the most helpful solution to reduce the crime rate.
In conclusion, contrary to some views arguing that the best way to shrink the criminal incidents in society is allocating more police officers on the street, my notion is: hardly could it be the best solution. As the rate of cyber crime, such as phishing or hacking with the aim of holding people for ransom, has been recently rising, employing cyber police would be the most effective way to mitigate this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07453416149 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78063927644 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4403652815 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.545454545 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2727272727 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327005105439 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117351221333 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05758456021 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182508861367 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445907665544 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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