In some countries ,the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measurs could be taken solve them?
In some nations, peolpe face the bodyweight problems . Due to this their health and fitness is declining. In this essay i discuss the causes amd solutions to tackle this problems.
The first and foremost point is fast food. Nowadays people eat more junk food. Owing to this they spoil their health as well as fitness and face the problems regarding overweight ,skin problems. Second problem is busy work schedule. Due to this masses do not have a time for excercise. But sometimes people are free they spend their most of the time on gadgets.
There are some solutions to tackle the situations is eat more green vegetables and homemade food rather than fast food. This problem is mostly faced by childrens . Last but not the least, individuals do the regularly excercise to reduce their overweight as well as use the footpath and bicycle to go on their jobs instead of motorbike or car.
Conclusion, according to my opinion if people wants to eat the junk food they should do the excercise to reduce their body weight as well as govenment should provide the free yoga classes for masses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82446808511 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44419715305 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56914893617 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4369443817 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7692307692 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160351632914 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608637569366 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374297495324 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103538635776 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231270849052 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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