In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels health and fitness is decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Lately, it has been confirmed that obesity has become a worldwide phenomenon, not to mention the devastating health problems, inextricably linked with such weight gains. Obviously, there exist numerous culprits, triggering alarming cholesterol, sugar and fat in the bodies of global citizens.
The 21st century hectic lifestyles have ruled out healthy diets and home-made meals, thanks to endless rat-races and modern men and women, occupied 24/7. Even children have to allocate their precious time amongst school, private tuition and extracurricular activities. That is where these so called convenient foods and carbonated drinks come in, thereby fattening consumers.
To make matters worse, sedentary lifestyles can also be held accountable for such worsening trends. People would simply drive even to short distances and exploit escalators or elevators for high-rising venues. Worst of all, field sports and outdoor activities have virtually been replaced by television and online games, consequently creating coach potatoes.
To combat these problems, a number of attempts should be made. First of all, people should be made aware of the possible dangers of their unhealthy food intake and irresponsible lifestyle. What is more, sensible eating habits should be widely publicized. In addition to this, healthier transportation modes, such as walking and biking should be encouraged.
In the same way, schools and workplaces should facilitate their members with well-equipped gyms or fitness centres. On the other hand, fast-food outlets should be required to keep their menus nutritious. Last but not least, over-weight individuals, more likely to waste health budget, should be charged with higher health insurance fees. Only then can the worsening crises be halted.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, then, well, in addition, such as, first of all, what is more, in the same way, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73863636364 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83468763209 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6074545733 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142691191807 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440404836357 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324920200772 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675962100267 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439639210655 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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