In some countries,it can be difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience.
What do you think are the causes of this problem, and what measures could be taken to sole it.
Old people are necessaries in country. However some countries people over the age of 50 find it difficult to get good job.
Therefore, this essay will examine the main cause and solutions of this ongoing issue.
The first cause of this issue is because of efficiency. The company in the modernized society must develop faster. So employee should use devices with high technology that it difficult to use or learn new somethings by olderly employee.
In addition,they can have health issue because of age the problems are office sysdrome, low-energy and low memory to cognitive abilities decrease with ages.In order to solve this issue, employer should provide new position that do not use power or not work related with new technology. Such as, administation, consultation because ole people have huge experience and good dicisions, so they can have persuasive skill. Definitely company may be provide welfare in health more.
The second cause happen because of salary. The big company hire employee follow by experience and age, so the old people employ have highest salary and they want to more salary. As a result, it is difficult for company to invest on them. However, that than develop to process or improve technology. In order, special bonus is increase for pay olderly people. When they be selected to promote shop. In order to solve this employee should have to hire the old people with normal rate salaries but give other benefit,such as increase vacation, offer new activities outdoor or restaurant and company should negotrate customs other property.
In conclusion, the effects given observe can not be overlook imporved the effect for the betterment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
Old people are necessaries in country. However some countries people over the age of 5...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...hings by olderly employee. In addition,they can have health issue because of age th...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... cognitive abilities decrease with ages.In order to solve this issue, employer sho...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
...ience and age, so the old people employ have highest salary and they want to more salary. As...
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Line 7, column 360, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nus is increase for pay olderly people. When they be selected to promote shop. In or...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , such
...mal rate salaries but give other benefit,such as increase vacation, offer new activit...
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Line 7, column 552, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'activities'' or 'activity's'?
Suggestion: activities'; activity's
...it,such as increase vacation, offer new activities outdoor or restaurant and company shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18819188192 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66622977227 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.6407158152 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7058823529 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186720210947 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615509791031 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541181617554 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106697529194 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552078151292 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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