In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the rising number of adults choose to live with their parents, although they have already finished education and found jobs. While this pattern of behaviour has some advantages, I believe that they are outweighed by its disadvantages.
On the one hand, conflicting views due to generation gap and privacy could be the problems that many adults have to deal with. Firstly, because young people nowadays perceive life different than the previous generations, they are likely to conflict with their parents in terms of love entanglement and lifestyles, and therefore the relationships could deteriorate . For example, while strict Asian parents reject the idea of love without marriage and having a kid, the majority of young people these days do not consider marriage as an essential factor with regard to their love life, but focus on emotions and moments instead. In addition, adults may deal with their privacy being invaded by their parents. Although parents want to know more about their children and how they are doing, some adults may find it irritating if their parents pay too much attention to their personal problems.
On the other hand, young adults want to feel loved and safe as well as keep memories. First of all, people are living in a complicated world, meaning that they have to face with many issues related to mental health, such as depression and anxiety, and it would be beneficial for these adults to have somebody to rely on and share their problems, simply because dealing with these problems alone is distressing. Indeed, sharing and caring bond the family members together, and therefore young people no longer feel lonely. Secondly, these adults make so many unforgettable memories in their house with their parents that they are not willing to leave them behind.
In conclusion, whereas I recognize the potential benefits of adults living with their parents, I consider it to be a huge advantage for many adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.128125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57503725397 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6330197331 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.75 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.1666666667 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325217153459 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122190608041 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692859211895 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203750691373 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502906097088 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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