Many countries import large amounts of food from other parts of the world. Is this a positive or negative development?
Importing food from abroad is a growing tendency among a significant number of nations. While there have been some potential drawbacks, I believe that the benefits are more impressive.
On the one hand, imported food tends to contain more detrimentally artificial preservatives and cause rising competition among domestic and international businesses. First of all, as food-importing from a different country takes much longer to reach the final destination, numerous toxic ingredients are used to deter them from rotting. As a result, this is not often fresh and nutrient-dense when they appear at convenience stores and supermarkets. Secondly, domestic food brands can suffer from losing their market share due to globally attractive international businesses. For example, China has to battle with losing the market share due to the growing popularity of Vinamilk, which is a Vietnamese dairy product, among Chinese consumers especially Chinese parents who are impressed by its quality.
On the other hand, countless nations provide their citizens with diverse food cultures concerning the wealth of imported food. People do not need to travel to far-off places to relish food delicacies because numerous national food markets nowadays offer a cross-cultural representation of gastronomy. Therefore, people have a wide range of choices in terms of tasty recipes for all seasons. For example, in Singapore, a growing business trade of tropical fruits worth millions of dollars such as mangoes and watermelons from Vietnam and various livestock commodities from Australia.
In conclusion, although imported food causes some disadvantages for domestic companies and worrying artificial ingredients. From my perspective, I consider this phenomenon to be a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73863636364 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18001166249 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662878787879 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9782086975 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22113599763 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772431992084 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585917583999 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134756627745 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246125795547 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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