In some coutries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development ?
In recent year, there has been a considerable rise in the number of people who decide to live alone, especially in large metropolis in developed world. From my perspective, this trend can be seen as a positive development owing to its great benefits on personal and broader economic scale.
The rise in one-person household can firstly have a huge impact on an individual level. People who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with other members of family. Take the experience of my elder brother when he chose to move out and live alone in his first year at university. During this period, he has learned how to cook, clean, pay the bills, and manage his own budget, all of which are valuable life skills. The rise in the number of such individuals like my brother can certainly be seen as positive.
Another big advantages of the trend towards living alone are the economic reasons. In particular, when there are many more people choosing to live alone, the demand for housing, estate agents, and a wide range of other products and services will also increase. This is likely to benefit the businesses which rely on homeowners and boost the economy of locals, through consumption and construction activites. For instance, according to a study of Hanoi National University on the its students living in single-bed household in 2014, the demand of these students for rents and convenient food has almost doubled compared to those who live with flatmates or family.
In conclusion, the acquistion of important life skills and the benefits for local economy are the key reasons for the trend towards living alone. Despite having some negative effects, it is agreed that they are outweight by the benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...a study of Hanoi National University on the its students living in single-bed household...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97288135593 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6480847366 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5136771748 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.846153846 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220754058042 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705838213859 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580484452675 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122346439613 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281253955535 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.