In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Some people have a cultures such as. Children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough, the advantage of this opinion is ok if the children get a lesson from their parents and get a lesson from their environment, because usually children following their environment and learning from their parents also, example is if the parents is a hard worker but still handle a time for their family and get achievement it can be followed by children. But if their parents cannot image that situation, the way is try to give some gift or special gift for their children if they reach a good score in test or shows a good attitude for parents and everyone.
But disadvantage about giving that message to children is sometime it can become straight to their children, and the children feel stress if cannot reach that they want. It can be seen from that children crying, its shows that the children have a under pressure from their parents because must be reach something, example case is rank in school, some parents want to children get a good score or highest rank in school, and do a gambler for this, if the children get a low score they cant get a toy or doll forever, its make stress for children and become obey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a culture' or simply 'cultures'?
Suggestion: a culture; cultures
Some people have a cultures such as. Children are often told that t...
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Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rying, its shows that the children have a under pressure from their parents becau...
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Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s, if the children get a low score they cant get a toy or doll forever, its make str...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55605381166 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35753349197 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466367713004 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.37486123 49.4020404114 296% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.2 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.6 20.7667163134 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398044269316 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221696648904 0.084324248473 263% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101054512766 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321245456538 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278074041356 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.74 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.06 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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