Some feel executives in large companies shoud receive high salaries while others think they are paid too much compared to ordinary workers.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Though some believe that high-ranking executing position deserve their exorbitant salaries, others argue that they earn disproportionally compared to normal workers. It seems to me that, outsized compensation is unreasonable in a vacuum but make sense given the capitalism.
Critics often dispute over the ratios defy justification. Up-to-date publications have quoted figures illustrating executive positions, mostly focused on CEOs, who makes hundreds of times what the average person does. This take into account their various remuneration packages and bonuses. It is quite unacceptable to claim this money is deserved. Many CEOs work extra hours and graduated from prestigious institutions, but their tangible impact can be marginal relative to the key driving forces behind product development and the many hard-working employees required for a business to thrive. Even the most ardent supporters of these practices would not claim their output is hundreds of times higher than an ordinary employee.
Notwithstanding, this practice acts in accordance with basics principles of supply and demand. The simple evidence that there is apparently an endless supply of average individuals to staff entry-level positions, but capable executives are fewer. These high-ranking jobs require an extraordinary commitment in terms of hours that most are unwilling to invest, and exceptional character qualities raging from leadership skills to raw intelligence. Since the top positions in an organization are hard to fill and the organization has the finances to pay premium wages, it is logical that executive salaries outdo many workers and their bonuses that appear unjust. Given the fact that, these payments have little relationship with justice and more to do with the economic realities of capitalism.
In conclusion, while their salaries seem outlandish, executives are more difficult to replace and deserve higher pay. This is disagreeable for some, but important, truth for the average individual to accept.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75585284281 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10985359146 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655518394649 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.075059893 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.733333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972563928845 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291921812966 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429655679906 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696323932572 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038197021837 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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