Some organization believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
One of the important aspects in organization is about how their member should dress. Some of them argue that their fellows should care about their fashion style, while others think that quality of work is matter more than others. This essay aims to explore more about these opinions followed by my opinion.
Wearing a formal dress and being good looking are the general requirement in some organizations, because they think that appearance will have big impacts on the development of organization. For example, in the marketing sector, the sales will present their best appearance to attract consum...
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while others think that quality of work is matter more than others.
while others think that the quality of work matters more than others.
because their appearance play an important role toward public opinion.
because their appearance plays an important role toward public opinion.
The one who make direct contact with people,
The one who makes direct contact with people,
Sentence: They assume that appearance takes a lot of people time and distract their focus on work, because they will spend a lot of time to choose their dress and make their fashion style as the priority more than their jobs.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and time
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Characters: 1954 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.421 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.115 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.851 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 8.659 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.545 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
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