Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in TV, videos games and other types of entertainment for children’s leisure. How does this affect children? How do you think problem can be tackled?
Many parents have concerns on mounting violence on television, digital games and other means of children's entertainment. This essay states that children's personality would be affected by this issue, and the best way to curtail this problem is the enactment of laws against outrageous entertainment.
To embark on, more and more young children spend their spare time on television shows and video games. Violent tv scenes and outrageous games would definitely impact the naive mind of children. On watching such programs and games, children tend to develop hostile behaviour, and they would be easily enraged by others in the future. There is also a possibility for them to embroil in serious physical violence.
For instance, a lot of parents around the globe accuse the digital games like PUBG as it makes younglings to behave aggressively at home and school.
Several countermeasures could be taken against the violence in games and sitcoms, but enacting laws to reduce hostility would be the most appropriate solution. Bureaucrats ought to restrict the level of violence in television and video games. Films, games, tv shows with explicit rage should be banned, and so children would not have any chance to watch and play them. This type of edicts are applicable to the social media too. For example, Censor Board in Srilanka recently restricted a television series related to terrorism to people above eighteen years.
In conclusion, television and e-games often show violent content to people, which would have negative impact on children's behaviour.
Implementing stringent laws could mitigate this issue to a great extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33590733591 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76878399047 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1810903684 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262848969691 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865624187754 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044068974511 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120839980609 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703558523522 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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