Task 2
There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many inventions have been found by human beings like wheel, however some think that the internet is the most significant one. This essay completely agrees with the statement as it makes communication easier and reduces work load of people.
The prime reason why people say that the internet is the best invention of man is easy communication. After the advent of internet, global connectivity has increased to a great extent. For instance, individuals can converse with people of other countries through social media applications like Facebook, Twitter and Instagram. They share ideas of common interests and discuss about global issues in them, whereas this was impossible before the arrival of the internet and so people were not connected with others.
Moreover, internet makes several tasks simpler and thereby reduces the work load of people. To cite an example, nowadays, money transaction has become easy for masses. People pay bills, taxes and fees via online mode of payment which prevents them from exhausted bank activities. However, in the past days, they were in a need to go to banks, even for transferring a small amount to others and wasted a great deal of time. But, internet saves people's time from these hard tasks.
In conclusion, eventhough humans invented a lot of things like wheel, internet is the incredible one. Since internet has made universal communication possible and reduces the complexity of works like money transfer, it is the most noteworthy invention of man.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...was impossible before the arrival of the internet and so people were not connecte...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... were in a need to go to banks, even for transferring a small amount to others an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21900826446 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69684060562 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648760330579 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.831462347 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1538461538 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275497432714 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911006037239 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850241629396 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17429895116 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933743691828 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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