Task 2: There have been many inventions in the human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is a common belief that the internet is the most crucial invention in human history. However, I do not concur with this opinion because of some reasons.
Although the internet enhances people’s lives such as accessing information easily, chatting with others from a long distance, ..,it is not the most necessary thing among human inventions. If the invention has the most important impact on humans, they may become extinct without it. But before the internet was invented, ancient people survived and built society by other inventions, for example the electricity, television,… Therefore, the disappearance of the internet can not put humans in danger of extinction. Furthermore, there are more inventions that play a more important role than the internet. For instance, discovering the way of making fire helps our ancestors escape from dangerous wild animals at night and harsh weather in winter. So without it, the population may be as high as nowadays or human may not exist.
The other reason is that the internet brings not only benefits but also drawbacks to human. When the internet is established, people spend more and more time staring at smartphones or computers, which take them from physical activities, detrimental for their health because of the ultralight from modern devices and a sedentary lifestyle. Besides, it is evitable that online thieves can steal information accounts for illegal purposes. In reality, millions of dollars were stolen by hackers through the internet.
In conclusion, despite being helpful in human life, the internet should not be considered as the most important invention.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
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Line 2, column 424, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36575875486 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84751005702 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645914396887 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3958132567 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240883538234 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878866340032 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065163159565 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16139018268 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813071835248 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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