Some parents buy and allow their children anything they ask or want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have on children as they grow older?
Parenting is one of the hardest thing in a world. Because mothers and fathers can directly effect childrens personality. They have to be carefull when they are growing their kids. Parents should take a control from kids but also kids should be free. Therefore its really hard to balance it for parents.
In these days we can see many parents who are lost their control on their sons or girls. These father and mothers are doing what their children want. This is a big fail of parenting these kids will be think they can have whatever they wish even these things are bad for them. Parents should control it for example if a child will ask for play videos games like over 3 hours daily, parents should force them in order to sav their childs eyes and brain. Besides children are dont have life experience like older people for that reason they would not know whats bad or good for them. Parents must to control kids wishes for their safety.
Moreover when kids grow up whose father and mothers do whatever they want, they willbe think it will be same for other people. When they go to school they wil ask their teachers or friends something and if they hear the word "no" they will totaly schoked. Because they never know what no means. Parents should be prepare their childer for real life which nobody can do all their wishes. Also saying no is important for kids healts. For instance if parents buy kids fast food whenever kids cry for it, after few years they can see how these foods harm childs body.
İn conclusion, parents should care about their childrens wishes, they have to decide for their kids even kids cry for it. Children can cry in order to gey what they want but when they grow up, they will be thankfull to their parents for saying no.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55172413793 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00752311937 2.80592935109 72% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526645768025 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3444199284 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4210526316 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333711734753 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126133487147 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800869573039 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252610357366 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575026435611 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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