Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays some people believe that fashion items are too expensive, whereas others think that this is right because fashion has an important value and people must pay a little more if they want to be trendy. Personally, I think that if a fashion garment has a high quality then people have to pay the right price to have it, otherwise they should spend their money on other cheaper things.
However, people who think that fashion clothes and items are too expensive to be worn by everyone, are right because they are normal people that doing an average job can't afford to buy these articles even if they like them. Sometimes it happens to see a beautiful dress or wonderful shoes exposed in a shop window and not to be able to buy them because of the price. Unfortunately, this causes anger and frustration in ordinary people.
On the other hand, not everyone agrees with this point of view. There are others that believe the opposite statement. Infact, they think that people need to wear elegant and sofisticated clothes to be cool and modern. Obviously, they have a certain price that is not available to everyone and this fact makes fashion items much more unreacheable to anybody. This is why these articles of clothing often are bought by rich people.
To conclude, in my opinion what really counts is the quality of clothes because if a certain piece of clothing has not good features and properties is worthless to spend a lot of money, even if it's a brand item. In this way people will be much more happy to be able to spend their money because that item or garment will be qualitatively better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...normal people that doing an average job cant afford to buy these articles even if th...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...thless to spend a lot of money, even if its a brand item. In this way people will b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, then, whereas, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67957746479 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41594203931 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514084507042 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.480330549 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224355194075 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840774548719 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605646044655 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145246760391 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039069504804 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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