Some people believe that bicycles are the best mode of transport in the cities while others disagree. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both views and give your opinion.
It is believed that bicycles are the ideal means of transport in urban areas, while some people oppose this viewpoint. Personally, I think that riding bicycles can bring more benefits than risks to urban citizens
On the one hand, there are a range of disadvantages when people commute by bicycles in the cities. To begin with, bicycles are not as comfortable as motorcars or public transportation. In fact, bicycles do not have a shelter, so it is inconvenient when people commute in extreme weather such as sunny or stormy. The other disadvantage is that riding a bicycle is much more risky in big cities because it increases the risk of accidents. In many countries around the world, some governments do not build specific lanes for cycling, so many bicycle riders merge into car lanes. As a result, it can lead to many accidents for commuters
On the other hand, it is undeniable that there are some tremendous benefits of riding a bicycle in the big cities. Firstly, having a contribution towards being eco- friendly is one of the most advantages when people ride bicycles. For instance, Beijing is the most polluted city in the world because there are many cars or other vehicles during rush hours, so it releases a large amount of smoke into the environment. It can lead to the risk of air pollution in the future, so riding bicycles is the best way for protecting the environment. Secondly,it is easier for bike users to commute through congested places. Bicycles is so small that people can lift it during traffic jam
In conclusion,despite a few risks, it is evident that many countries are promoting the use of bicycles as they provide many benefits such as reducing air pollution and commuting easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89419795222 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82327040946 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511945392491 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5769721393 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203662687258 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831983120065 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583172796039 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123643746486 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586479713913 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.