Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often argued that the death penalty should not be used and alternative types of punishment should be applied to criminals. However, many disagree with this and think that in case of major crimes punishment of death can be allowed. This essay agrees that the punishment should fit the crime. This essay will discuss both points of view.
Regarding contemporary use, most countries, including almost all First World countries, have abolished capital punishment. The governments of these countries, following modern tendency against punishment of death, completely ignore the fact that the punishment should fit the crime. That is to say, the penalty should depend on the type of crime committed and in some particular serious cases capital punishment can be implemented to such perpetrators as murderers, terrorists or rapists. Despite this, the officials continue to abolish the death punishment either in law or in practice, guided by the moral principals toward humanity. The criminals, on the other hand, do not have such attention to their victims, so we should not either. For example, a recent report of crime statistics in Ukraine revealed that many criminals after prison release continued a life of crime.
Despite a trend toward abolishing capital punishment, there are a lot of countries prefer to retain the death penalty in active use. The officials of these countries honestly believe that ones it is shown that major crime will be followed by the strict justice and severe punishment and people would think before they acted illegally. It helps the government to control a life of crime among flow masses, to cut crime and very often even to prevent new one. For instance, a 2020 study found that the countries with the criminal justice system that allows capital punishment had very low level of the most serious crimes, and added that minor crimes such as pick pocketing or shoplifting was the most significant part of the latest crimes.
In conclusion, while many people believe in the human approaches to murderers, terrorists, abusers or rapists and vote against capital punishment, others argue that criminals do not deserve humanism and favor the death penalty as a severe punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e death penalty as a severe punishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, honestly, however, if, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20391061453 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68588600762 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536312849162 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4824953265 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.2 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383780257084 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123151873297 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754290163004 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219158586783 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086230489596 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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