Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of a bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is claimed by some people that innate characteristics is the determinant of whether a person grows up into a criminal, while the opponent of this idea argues that social conditions and misery are what to blame for. Although both of the opinions stated remain reasonable, I would be more persuaded by the later view.
On the one hand, individuals’ natural personalities can be attributable to whether or not they become a criminal. Regarding those with mental breakdown such as epilepsy, they are innately deprived of the ability to take control of their behaviors and being unable to think straightly. As a result, if they suffer from over-provocation, these people are more likely to make serious mistakes of committing crime or manslaughter, even just by accident. What is more, individuals who are born selfish and lazy can also turn into offenders in the future due to their hatred for others’ achievement and the pipe dream of gaining without paying. Hence, youngsters like these may choose to steal from others to make a living instead of working hard with their own hands.
However, those individuals discussed as above only account for a small percentage of the crime rate, it is rather the responsibility of current issues and hardship to take for the breeding of future wrongdoers. As a matter of fact, many under-priviledged people have to resort to crime such as stealing or blackmailing, even when they do not want to, as a way to free themselves from the quagmire of life. Additionally, other social problems namely unemployment can also be another root for crime. Clearly enough, without a stable self-economy, which might be acquired by obtaining a job, individuals are unwantedly forced to seek different other ways, including committing crimes, in order to get by.
In conclusion, I concur that social conditions and poverty are the major factors that contribute to prevalent crimes. Therefore, both the governments and citizens should make joint efforts to prevent this from thriving.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17073170732 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04995099482 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618902439024 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9779696238 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.461538462 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217283061864 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669856346252 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435733343818 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112798412694 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027967287341 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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