Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable that the antisocial activities have been snowballing across the globe. Innumerable issues are being faced by people. Section of society thinks that criminal should be sent to jail for a long time which is the best method to overcome crimes in the cities and countryside while other averse that there are another way to control the against law activities. The following paragraphs will analyze the impact of the reasons and propose a logical conclusion.
To commence, discussing the former viewpoint, the first and foremost one is, offenders cannot plan other misdeed activity due to long term prison punishment. As a ramification, people would feel safe and comfortable outside. Moreover, criminals may be realized their mistakes and they would try to become good citizens of the nation and due to a long time in jail, they will have a fear of physical punishment. For instance, as per the report of TIME magazine that 60% of antisocial people who had been got more than 20 years of prison punishment, the ratio of recidivism was only 5% in Britain
Conversely, discussing the second point, to begin with, the government should start education in the jail by which criminals can acquire knowledge regarding culture, moral values, and ethics of country. As a consequence, they may not become part of the illegal work. Furthermore, the law and enforcement should give chance rehabilitation to criminals who did small crimes. Therefore, the percentage of crime would be dwindling in the nation.
In the final analysis, the reflection exhibited to the above statement leads to firmly assert that the stringent rules and regulations should be made by the authority if they will not act judiciously regarding law and order then citizens will pay for it in the years to come.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1186440678 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83281951732 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.072959072 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.833333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946995206449 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316215185338 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366535653014 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515796419505 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310027134477 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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