Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory jobs or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that the best way to deal with miserable circumstances is doing nothing, whereas others agree that appropriate actions need to be taken to mitigate such situations. Personally, I believe that finding and implementing congruous solutions could help people overcome troubles.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why some people believe that doing nothing is the best way to deal with miserable circumstances. Firstly, most those people, especially people in Asia and Eastern regions, believe certain prejudice and accept belief of superstition, that means each creature has its own life circle and destiny, which cannot be changed within any actions and efforts. Secondly, despite of enormous efforts that people spend to enhance the bad situations, they still got defeats which attach and destroy their will. Both of above ideas, therefore, create a negative thought about success and fail into these people’s conscious, and make them passive to the problems in their life.
On the other hand, I believe that there is just one unique way to obtain prosperous life and success that is taking actions. The first essential action people need to take to face with the bad situation is keep calm, which can give people a comprehensive looking at the issue such as the reasons, causes, effects of it before thinking about solutions. Besides, investigation is crucial for efficient solutions that help people to mitigate problem. In the period time of Corona virus, for example, lots of restaurants have been forced to closed according to social distance regulation, some owners of these restaurants surrender our destiny and wait until new announcement from government; whereas others try to assess their business such as storage, cooking procedures, bill system to improve and optimise their service, which will help them attract customers when social restriction lifted.
In conclusion, there are some people surrender their destiny and take no actions to deal with bad circumstance, but I totally agree with others who believe actions play pivotal role in solving problem and give them good consequences which they deserve.
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- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory jobs or shortage of money Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- Some people say History is one of the important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your opinion 89
- Water resources are falling deficient Causes and Solutions 89
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m good consequences which they deserve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35693215339 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67917420759 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604719764012 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.4744488611 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.090909091 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8181818182 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224334759509 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804364945712 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359475770779 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134504439681 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265404307044 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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