In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
There are various technology advances in agriculture field recent years, but famine still occurs in some areas throughout the world. I am of the opinion that there are anticipated causes and several appropriate solutions could be taken to prevent this issue.
A major reason leading to food shortage in certain countries is food waste in nations where have plentiful food supplies. Thanks to development technology in agriculture, most of countries have enough food distribution for their own consumption but a significant portion of nourishment was wasted instead of using for nutrition purpose. Restaurant and supermarket, for example, are main sources of food waste, where customers’ choices are based on the freshness of products; if there are any unqualified products, they will become waste. Another reason of this problem is that advanced technologies in farming are unpopular in poor and developing countries such as nations in Africa continent, where food shortage usually occurs due to underdeveloped economy as well as technological disadvantages. International supports have been implemented but whose impacts were not enough to mitigate the current situation.
However, several solutions could be proceeded by both governments and individuals to enhance global famine. Firstly, governments could release food-saving policies which could help to save food from wasting and use them for international supporting campaigns to poor countries. Moreover, exchanging agriculture technology is necessary for helping other nations create their own nourishment resources that can be sufficient in the long-term plans. Secondly, restaurant and especially supermarket are encouraged to have schemes to reduce food waste. AI (artificial intelligence) application and logistic system should be used in food industry for exerting optimal procedure to minimise food waste of the processes.
In conclusion, food shortage is usually global issue in certain countries despite of development of technology, I believe that there is variety of solutions could be implemented to deal with problem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
... development technology in agriculture, most of countries have enough food distribution for their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79220779221 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13917891447 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7520211252 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.230769231 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923421996261 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378847125701 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433343172694 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751048090703 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538465127699 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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