Some people believe that it is a good idea for older people to work if it is possible for them to do so Do you agree or disagree

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Some people believe that it is a good idea for older people to work if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree

It is suggested that elders should continue pursuing their career as long as possible. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement as older adults can not only get rid of being a financial burden but also a sedentary lifestyle if they decide to maintain their jobs

On the one hand, people who are retired, creating a big pressure on their children as they are not capable of earning money. It is true that many elders have to suffer from being disrespected by their children who have to work so hard in order to feed the whole family. Hence, because they can not split the bills, they are seen as useless people who are treated only because of responsibility. As a result, they can avoid this by going to work, which enables them to be independent of their children’s money as well as makes them feel free to buy whatever they want

On the other hand, having a job is beneficial for both elders’ mental and physical health as they have chances to meet new people and move around often. In detail, it is scientifically proved that elders who are jobless will have a higher chance of being diagnosed with obesity or other health issues as they do not socialize or exercise regularly. Working helps elders see themselves as valuable and avoid loneliness since they are surrounded by colleagues, along with making them move from place to place. All together are of paramount importance for them to maintain a healthy well-being

To conclude, many elders are believed to better commit to their careers for a longer time. From my perspective, I totally endorse this viewpoint as it brings elderly people tremendous advantages in terms of mentality and physical

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tages in terms of mentality and physical
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81314878893 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61420459874 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574394463668 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7047930208 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.555555556 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1111111111 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160847466903 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642227627371 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406119509033 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930704993703 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359141526578 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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