In today's fast moving world gaining knowledge and information is a really o-jelly kind of a job. The internet is just a key away to provide you with as much research available on science, arts, literature, education and so on. However, some individuals are of the opinion that it must be kept in a closed jar; unseen from the eyes of the cruel world.
Scientist all-round the globe are involved in research and development. Any new piece of work discovered is ecstatic, as it will help the common man. Undefined efforts are being taken to find out cures on life threating. Big institutions and business tycoons have separate teams set up to carry on research on the latest market trends, the customers demand v/s supply, financial crisis, competitor’s perspectives, and so on.
Education is like a knowledge giving tree; we should support to spread out its branches so that its fruits are enjoyed by any individual who aspires to pursue it. During the old and medieval ages, people used to write on the barks of trees or stones were engraved to store information and pass on to the future generation.
However, ever coin has two sides. Similarly, there are people who have a different perspective to all these views. There are some important aspects in a research which have to be kept under the nose so that it isn’t misused. Political conflicts and difference in opinion can be a reason to it. Pokran mission in India was a classic example to this situation; wherein only a few trustworthy people knew of the nuclear testing mission. There is also a commercial aspect to this.
Overall, in my opinion, I feel that information which is useful to the common public should be shared openly and freely. Whereas, some data is better kept secret; so that the underlying mission of a better tomorrow is accomplished.
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a business man who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter 73
- The only reason people work hard is to earn more money There are no other reasons to do it To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
- In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion? 61
- You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.Say how 78
- There have been several complaints about the reception area where the visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved.Write a letter to manager.Describe the complains that have been received. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...dge and information is a really o-jelly kind of a job. The internet is just a key away t...
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Line 9, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... underlying mission of a better tomorrow is accomplished.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, similarly, so, whereas, i feel, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88461538462 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79689264743 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61858974359 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4230994496 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6470588235 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17385952268 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469803667592 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425425229963 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898833486534 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418018971665 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.