Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be share freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The modernization and industrialization are widespread day by day around the world. Along with that development, people tend to share their works, studies, and research information to the public. However, there are some people assume that it is not good to do that because some data is so crucial and precious to be announced. In this essay, I would like to discuss both views and give my opinion on this statement.
It cannot be denied that providing information to the community is a good action because it will lead people to approach new knowledge and support them to realize what happens to surround them. Moreover, the significant development of internet supplies people with searching tools and triggers people look for the information which they want such as scientific, political, and business news. For example, if students want to gain the material to finish their essay, they will need to online and search the information which relates to their topics. As a result, it will show them a hundred thousand even million results to assist them to complete the essay.
On the other hand, there are some classified researches and news cannot be published such as government documents, business plans, and scientific works. In addition, these types of papers may be contained some important information which can bring the advantages to the rivals or competitors. For instance, a company collects the profile of the customers and starts to analyze the data to approach and sell their products to the consumers, but accidentally, the data is posted on social means like Facebook or Twitter. Consequently, the competitors will take this information to maximize their profits.
In conclusion, sharing information to society is good action but people should consider the data which they can share to avoid unexpected situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... will show them a hundred thousand even million results to assist them to complete the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21959459459 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90282530002 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7907882561 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274490602213 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935139587693 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650059897832 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172967863024 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503518930567 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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