Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. Do you agree or disagree.
Various nations are living around the world and they try to improve their lives every moment with modern technologies that mean Simple life of every people is becoming complex. So it is often said that the contemporary world has too many choices to citizens for selection. I believe that it is entirely straightforward and I strongly agree with this assertion.
Furthermore, I glad to say, I have a plethora of benefits for this statement. Firstly, since the last half-century, the world became a small village with the internet and globalization. So the Internet has led to a dramatic expansion in the number of choices which are available us. The internet has a various number of business websites and also social media such as Facebook, Instagram which are led to a vast number of choices. For instance, If I search various websites to buy a new mobile phone, can see different types of phones. There are differ from size, features, prices and memory. Consequently, we have too many choices in that world. Secondly, when I was a child, I could watch limited and few TV channels but, now we have selected various channels among around 200 TV channels.
However, globalization is making the world smaller and compounding. This situation, some products made by less quality and cheap but same appearance So people can not select the best product among them. Today life we have to face various challenges rather than before.
To recapitulate, more choices are available nowadays in this world for people.by this, people have got many pros and cons effects. However, I would like to we have too many choices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9520295203 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78120605004 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7809712181 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241451553528 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080271888976 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948651727052 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15476924014 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790743874029 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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