Some people believe that in order to give opportunities to new generation companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree and why?
In the employment sector, it is still a debatable topic whether the older adults who has crossed 55 should be retired so that the young generation can replace the high level position of a company. In my perception, I totally agree to the statement since, young adults are not only technologically advanced but also physically healthy to face challenges in the workplace.
Firstly young generation reserve to get an opportunity to showcase their skills and abilities. To elaborate, they are smarter and faster than their subordinates because they are technologically sophisticated and technically upgraded. In the midst of covid-19,for instance, when offices and companies were completely lockdown zoom and Google met was the only platform to connect with the staffs and customers which was only plausible through the efforts of young brains. Apart from that, digital devices are always easily handed by the newer generation. Therefore, adolescence must be hired to ensure the continuity of productivity of a company.
Secondly, young aspirants are physically and psychologically healthy. To elucidate, they are about to start the career, hence they will be enthusiastic and more prudent than older people. For example,several labour work which might become difficult for the elderly to accomplish such as construction and Fireworks. Thus, it is imperative to understand the physical weaknesses and other health issues of the seniors and focus on the freshers who are energetic and capable enough to face any unprecedented situations.
To conclude, companies need to provide the youth a platform to highlighting their career because they are talented both technically and technologically. Apart from that, young individuals have the physical strength and capability to overcome any peril situation in the field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , several
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56115107914 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18466220998 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625899280576 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7702013978 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115219048375 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345992764347 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538516144616 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682723168632 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561709610305 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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