Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the pressure on professionals have increased. Some people believe that doctors and engineers should work in the same country where they had the training; however, others think that such professionals can work in any place they want. In my opinion, those people should be free to decide where to work despite their training nation.
On the one hand several individuals think that doctors and engineers should settle and find their job opportunities in the same country where they had been training. This is due to the fact that they are familiar with the place, people, and the devices they are using in their career. In addition, the nation that provided them the training has the right to get benefits from their potentials. For example if a doctor successfully did a difficult surgery which has low success rate, the other patients from the same place have the priority that their operation could be done by the same doctor.
On the other hand, others believe that doctors and engineers should have the chance to decide where to work even though they did not do the training there. This is because that other countries may help them to improve and gain new experience. Also, it would not be far easier for them to know what is new in that field the work unless they can travel and be free to choose their place of accommodation and job. For instance a recent study showed that %75 of successful professionals are who left their country and have worked in other various places.
In conclusion, these days, a lot of pressure is being applied on non-manual individuals like doctors and engineers. This essay discussed why some think that those professionals should work where they trained, but why it is crucial that they should be free to choose their place of work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83660130719 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48356552967 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493464052288 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1855377616 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.846153846 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.549232442735 0.244688304435 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195085394882 0.084324248473 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137208910577 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.382467718393 0.151304729494 253% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099635857408 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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