Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that some people claim that doctors and engineers would be better to take their job in the country where they have their training. While, other people think that they should have the option to work in any place they want. Although, I do believe that there are benefits and drawbacks professionals can get from this case.
Nowadays, the training that professionals have to take to fulfil their jobs requirements are not as easy as most of people thought. As a result, it leading to an assumption that doctors or engineers should work in the country where they are trained. People claims that, it may reduce the hardship they have to go through. Furthermore, they will adapt to the environment quickly since they have trained in the country beforehand. However, I do not really agree with this statement since I think they will not really enlarge their knowledge without stepping out of their comfort zones.
In contrast, a lot of people think that this assumption is not strong enough. So, they believe that professionals should work in any workplace they desire. Such as, going abroad to find a better job opportunities. In fact, professionals can also gain more knowledge that they cannot get by staying in the same country. Moreover, they can contribute to the country where they are from by adapting the experience they get overseas. Therefore, I do agree that workers should choose their workplace as they want.
In summary, whether working in a same country or going abroad have advantages and disadvantages. Although, I claim that professionals can get more benefits and experience by working in another country.
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- Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish Discuss both these views and give your 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...country where they have their training. While, other people think that they should ha...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ir jobs requirements are not as easy as most of people thought. As a result, it leading to an ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, i think, in contrast, in fact, in summary, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98168498168 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73931943672 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468864468864 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4453304901 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467827964153 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163372105291 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109597505882 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303923211976 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102152379922 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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