Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
It is more important to convey knowledge and skill between different countries and also important to have good opportunity to inhance their skills and talents. So, i believe people should free to work everywhere, where they wish to work.
Some people believe that professionals should be work their own country where they did their training rather than polish their skills and talents which they can do in other country. Not only about inhance their talents but also about salary are important for every professionals, such as doctors and engineers. Good salary always attract people and motive on their job, despite of hard working. For example, many educated people choose abroad country for their career, job, settlement and education because they need satisfaction with salary, facility, etc. as we can see many doctors and engineers from Nepal are staying in USA, Australia, Canada because of more income source.
In other hand, professionals are not getting opportunity to build their talent if they not move another country. For instance, I am nurse and still I am jobless. I went every hospital and clinic for job with good facility but I'm unable to find job in my country. Now I'm planning to go another country for better opportunity and facility. That's why it is vary necessary to go another country for work and opportunity.
To conclude, I believe migration is necessary one country to another country to work for good opportunity and good salary which can help to achieve their dream.
- Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish 56
- some people think that developments involving the internet have brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05241935484 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60489800692 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54435483871 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1420554454 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3846153846 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424628324982 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149612212733 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167811170436 0.0667982634062 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256879624421 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921667156504 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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