Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views whether sport plays a vital role in public. Although it can be argued that it is only a leisure activity for them, I believe that sport is really essential for all ages in society.
A growing body of research suggests that sport has a generally positive effect on people. One key benefit is that there will be a healthy lifestyle when people do exercises. It will be obviously beneficial for all members of society to have a high-quality life if they try their best to play any sports day by day. Taking Finland as an example, their government encourage citizens to do any sports regularly to gain a healthy life for yourself and defend our health's issues such as heart disease, diabetes, cancer,...
However, there are some negative impacts which must be considered. One important issue is that some people who do not have enough knowledge about benefits of sport think that sport only is an entertaining activity. Those are more likely to do other activities instead of playing sports. For instance, according to the Oxford University's survey, these data show that more than 30% out of 500 people who joined the survey do not really understand what sport brings to people's health and more.
In conclusion, most people only think that sport is nothing more than a leisure activity. In my opinion, despite of many issues related to sport, I believe that the benefits of sport bring to people more than those issues surrounding them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5353058987 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2978153125 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365656837658 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13248718448 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781021209316 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229537279423 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807988508585 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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