Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Education is considered to be the most essential tool to shape the future and character of a human since the existence of the human race. However, owing to the ever-changing nature of the education process, the mode of delivery of education has become debatable. Some people opine that homeschooling is the best way to educate a child, while other vote for the proper system of going to school. According to my opinion, although teaching at home is incumbent for the overall growth of children, it can't be the only method to children's development, the schools are the most essential for holistic development and learning.
There are myriad benefits of homeschooling, one the most significant is the safety and security of the most vulnerable children. The kids with some sort of sickness or in the need of utmost security can feel safe with this method of education. There are many instances when stars kids mean offspring of celebrities like Will Smith, Tom Cruise and many more have opted for homeschooling for educating their children rather than sending them to traditional schooling. Additionally, It is a great way to spend time together and access one-on-one learning sans the need to leave the house. Moreover, they can choose the particular subjects that they want to learn which are far better and constructive for child's development overweighing the conventional schooling techniques.
On the other hand, the schools are predominately the far best way for holistic development for the children as it gives the experience to deal with the real-life situations without the supervision of their parents. In addition to this, it provides an opportunity to develop their own friend circle and build a social circle. Despite the issue of a large number of students in a class, the chances of peer learning become a greater outcome of school education.
After discussing both all the view, It is evident that both media of education has its own positives, therefore, one can select one on the basis of their requirements, however, I considered both to be equally important, we can't rely completely on one to educate our future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08238636364 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93692159551 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0396980921 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.615384615 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334469941065 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103619534876 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111367474051 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183047135365 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877754927125 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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