Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.
While some people feel that boarding schools are an outstanding option for children, others disagree with this view. There are arguments on both sides, however, which we will discuss here.
On the one hand, opponents of boarding school argue that boarding schools are often accused of educating children not to socialize with their environment. This accusation is actually not without reason. Many boarding house schools really shut down their students in the dormitory so that they tend to be exclusive, do not know the environment. For instance, parents have no way to find whether their children are socialize at school.
On the other hand, though, proponents of this view say that boarding house is the best choice for the children claim that children can be independent at boarding schools, and it is the best place to get academic qualifications. Example is able to be seen in, parents give the amount of money they need every month. This will make them learn to manage their own finances, learn to manage their own belongings. The problem of losing a dorm is an open secret, as a risk of staying together. This is where the child learn to arrange his property to pack it. In boarding schools children can learn discipline with existing norms. All rules in the dormitory will shape the soul of children who obey the rules.
Overall, it seems boarding schools can be a better option for children to learn independent. However, it is not excellent option because it determine relation between parents and children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'socialized'.
Suggestion: socialized
... way to find whether their children are socialize at school. On the other hand, though...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hildren who obey the rules. Overall, it seems boarding schools can be a bette...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'determines'?
Suggestion: determines
..., it is not excellent option because it determine relation between parents and children. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, really, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57836501816 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2694914332 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333311900453 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111201000905 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120566764719 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235999770656 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924662706883 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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