Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the vanguard of technology, advertisement has a pivotal role in people’s product information acquirement. Many people believe that it is an efficient mean for everyone to buy high-quality goods and smooth the way for better life. However, the others perceive that advertising just distorts the truth and uses trick to make us buy unnecessary items. In this essay, I will support both views.
On one hand, it is believed that manufacturers abuse advertisement to make profit although their customers have no need to obtain. It can not be denied that producers will apply all strategies to talk consumers into buying goods by exaggerating its functions or images. In this case, people are easily taken in by advertisement’s ideal promises and have fallacy about product’s quality, which leads to their spending money unwisely. The perfect example for this is the introduction of functional products which are served for women’s weight-losing, household chores with extremely cheap price on TV. Indeed, people will have a chance to observe their in-need products lively and have an impulsion to buy them without knowing their detailed information. Therefore, buyers certainly feel shocked and regretful when using such terrible items because of its short using time, frequency of damage that need a relatively huge amount of money to repair. Accordingly, it is true to say that advertisement tend to lead people to futile goods.
However, thanks to the function of introducing new products, advertisement still brings people benefits in many cases. The reason is that customers will have a good knowledge in product’s information and make up their mind whether this item is suitable and worthwhile or not. As a result, they can partly avoid the problems of fake goods with low quality to restrict huge expense on wrong objects. For example, it has had a profound impact on people’s life in the rural areas. It is a common knowledge that those living in countryside tend to have less opportunities to approach modern information-transmitting means like Internet or media. Therefore, with the support from advertising industry, people can stand a golden chance of acquiring knowledge of convenient goods to have more choices for family’s shopping. Consequently, it can meet up people’s complicated demands and make way for their better life. Besides that, producers can also gain more profits and have motivation to create high-quality products when receiving buyer’s positive responses.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that advertisement has both negative and positive effect on people’s choices of buying goods. Therefore, it is essential for people to take products introduced into consideration to bring benefits for their life.
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- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives Which viewpoint do you agree with Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 73
- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives Which viewpoint do you agree with Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, consequently, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in many cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40139211137 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13495114311 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559164733179 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2406691467 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5238095238 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210256069195 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659866593877 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043813106358 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138862904396 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457056832263 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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