Some people say that job satisfaction is more important than a high salary.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays people tend to care about their mental being and it significantly influences the way they approach the process of finding an area for developing career. It is often said that the amount of renumeration is less significant than the happiness of the employees. I totally agree with this statement and believe that the emotional state increases the productivity of a worker and impressive salary does not compensate the stress level of those, who do not like their position.
Firstly, stable mental health encourage people to pay more attention to a task and be more efficient during working hours, which leads to high rates of working and opportunities of promotions or raise. This is because a human is more willing to be concentrated on the topic he or she enjoys.
Therefore
For example, the study of London Institute of Psychology showed that participants who were able to choose their tasks by interest performed better than those, who’s choice depended on the payment they wanted to receive. In other words with lower renumeration but higher satisfaction rate an employee is to earn more money as they are willing to work more.
Secondly, sometimes young adults regret their choice of a job due to the fact that they got confused with significant pay wages and did not rely on their personal opinion. It means that their performance in office is remarkably lower. Hence, majority of those employees suffer from insomnia, apathy, so they resign or get fired. For instance, Moscow Bureau of Statistics claims that the majority of Sberbank employees get fired within first year as they are not able to adapt to the stress levels at work, although the salary amount is 30% higher compared to other local banks. Thus, the amounts of disadvantages and health issues that come with unthoughtful choice usually outweighs the big renumeration.
In conclusion, the happiness of employees directly influences both health state and quality of working which is more important than the amounts of money people earn.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ntrated on the topic he or she enjoys. Therefore For example, the study of London Insti...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ant pay wages and did not rely on their personal opinion. It means that their performance in offic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12048192771 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73671058854 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58734939759 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9752692645 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.769230769 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143438388011 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469787824838 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042713127301 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876395975102 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363493759519 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.