Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
it is often argued that people in multiple culture and ages may come under one umbrella through music. In my opinion, people with various cultures and ages can be united with the power of music because it has no boundaries. This essay will first assert how music can be a powerful way to different nation and period together.
Firstly, People of different nations come together by music for charity. Sometimes, renowned bands visit one country to another for collecting money and give them any war-devastated country. Here people just feel the music and they attend the concert when language and culture have no barrier. For instance, an American musician collects the donation for the liberation war of Bangladesh. In this way, music becomes a powerful media beyond the culture.
Secondly, music can be a media of togetherness of different ages of people when it comes to the country song or the national anthem. it is the ritual of the country that all ages of people show honor to their national anthem. For example, in Bangladesh when people hear the national anthem, they just stand up and show their dignity. hence, music able to come to people of different ages together.
In conclusion, music has the vast power of bringing people together of all nation-state and all ages. sometimes music collects money for any nation and sometimes music bringing up people in one shade.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98283261803 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52734679265 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510729613734 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.3750576036 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.9285714286 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310435991139 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132721329072 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767914997054 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209146209773 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062177654541 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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