Some people say that parents shoud encourage thier children to take parts in organized group activities in thier free time,others say that it's important for them to learn how occupay themselves on their own
In the current era, most parents are always willing to instill good habits in their children, so they never neglect to encourage their children to participate in social activities and organized groups. While others believe that from an early age kids should learn to handle their life by their own self. In my opinion, I would claim that gathered activities will improve more qualities for youngsters. And this essay below will explain more about my opinion.
Researchers believe that teamwork is better than working alone. It will improve social relationships more, increase peace between people and people, which helps to limit the quarrels, conflicts in the communication society. Furthermore, while the leadership quality will increase that leads ourself in the future to handle the situations in the workplace. In addition good qualities such as discipline, team spirit, helping manners will be built through this. For example, in developed countries, they have compulsory group activities in schooling, campus times.
However, there are some who argue that children should learn to take care of themselves. There are compelling reasons why children should be able to be alone. Children learn to face all difficulties on their own without relying on their parents, thereby becoming more confident in life. Moreover, this not only gives them courage to think but also strength when making decisions. For example, some parents put their children into service jobs when they turn 16 to gain more experience.
To conclusion, take part in organized group activities would have more advantages, although parents pushing their sons and daughters to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Howerver, I think that participating in group activities will bring more benefits to young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...social activities and organized groups. While others believe that from an early age k...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...dle the situations in the workplace. In addition good qualities such as discipline, team...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40569395018 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67915047948 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619217081851 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0904400078 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254442551365 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774240238939 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773427097592 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16279816223 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747337243841 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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