Some people say that protecting the environment is the governments responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nature is the salient part in human life and protecting it from the damages caused because of us.It should be the first responsibility of every person including the government.In this essay, I would elaborate on the responsibilities that government and individuals took.
To begin with, the government proposed many initiatives to save environment from growing pollution, deforestation etc. For example, "Swatch Bharat Abhiyan" introduced by the Indian prime minister "Mr. Narendra Modi" for immaculate india . Another measure is clean Ganga river from the garbage like plastics, flowers,etc.by people that degraded the water and caused a threat to aquatic life.According to me, these initiatives were transit for the better environment.
Secondly, schools and colleges started many programs such as tree plantation, clean india etc . encouraging the students to participate.Student groups collaborate with the NGO's to spread awareness of neat and healthy nature.Marathons and street plays were introduced for knowingness.Mouth-to-mouth publicity done to pull more individuals.I think all these activities motivated individuals and had put light on the environment wellness.
In my opinion, these measures would have never been succeeded if only government took the responsibility. Both put equal energy to protect the environment and making it a success.To conclude, our life is dependable on the nature and to protect them the government and individual should move hand-in-hand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06481481481 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.72839566902 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.158003262 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.75 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219024125092 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082173452162 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618470739931 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128076283728 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672749006762 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.16 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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