Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern workplace, dress codes are changing as employersfocus more on results than on the rules that employees must follow. While Iagree that the way people dress should be seen as unimportant in many work, Ibelieve that dress codes still exist for good reason in certain professions. On the one hand, manyemployers have stopped telling their staff how to dress, and this is a positivetrend. Some of the most successful companies in the world, including technologygiants like Google and Facebook, are famous for the relaxed office environmentsthat they try to create. Employees are encouraged to dress casually,and even the company executives and leaders are rarely seen wearing anythingother than T-shirts and jeans. However, while employees are free to dress howthey like, they are expected to produce work of outstanding quality. It isclear from the performance and global dominance of such companies that strictdress codes are completely unnecessary in the technology sector. But on the otherhand, rules regarding employees' clothing are still relevant in other worksituations. People expect certain professionals, such as nurses, policeofficers and airline pilots, to wear uniforms. These uniforms may have a practicalor safety function, but perhaps more importantly they identify the person’sposition or role in society. For instance, a lawyer, politician or school principalmay wear formal clothing in order to show an image of authority,trustworthiness and diligence. In conclusion, Isupport the trend towards relaxed dress codes for workers. By dressing in aformal way, employees can work more efficiently in the office.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun work seems to be countable; consider using: 'many works'.
Suggestion: many works
... dress should be seen as unimportant in many work, Ibelieve that dress codes still exist ...
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Line 1, column 617, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...ployees are encouraged to dress casually,and even the company executives and leaders...
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Line 1, column 1450, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , trustworthiness
...g in order to show an image of authority,trustworthiness and diligence. In conclusion, Isupport ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77685950413 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58368111061 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640495867769 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8161162851 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15629326351 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613317251132 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551638093083 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15629326351 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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