Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of private healthcare outweigh the advantages?
In recent times, the general tendency has been that one of the fundamental demands of human is possessing a good health, so the healthcare services should be provided by private hospitals rather than public ones. While I accept that this situation has surely carried along with its both pros and cons, I would argue that there are more demerits than merits.
On the one hand, the most obvious gain of these circumstances is serving speed. People have not to pass a long waiting list for check-ups and diagnosis. A good example of this is that in many big public hospitals, people have to spend an entire morning or even all day on waiting in line for being medically examined. Another valuable result is that private hospitals may provide healthcare services to remote areas where health care is not accessible since they have enough funds and conditions to do this.
On the other hand, we should not turn a blind eye to the expected undesirable outcomes, which are overshadowed by advantages. Firstly, the cost of treatment could be exorbitant for poverty citizens who are incapable of paying this. Patients must pay prescription charges or the cost of using cutting-edge medical equipment while they do not have these needs could be taken as an example of this. Secondly, there is no doubt that quality of care may suffer if profits determine care or treatment decisions. As a consequence, people who have less money could be put in danger or even deprive their lives if doctors are driven by the incentives to gain money instead of their conscience.
In conclusion, it seems to me that such large drawbacks that running the healthcare services by private hospitals, which outweigh the benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...one of the fundamental demands of human is possessing a good health, so the healthcare servic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93379790941 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66377161178 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599303135889 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7475049155 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214345880805 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677425353418 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633729394829 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129991314511 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246943787115 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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