Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion.
Governmental liability in health care and education disbursements have been highlighted as an emerging issue in recent decades due to some significant impacts on national development. From my standpoint, I agree that such investments are governments’ responsibility.
It is true that governments should be responsible for spending on health care and education. Idealogically, the basic relationship between governments and citizens are based on the form of social contract, stipulating the rights and liabilities of both parties. Accordingly, individuals with different income levels are obliged to pay tax or other charges, and official authorites are liable for providing basic public services to guarantee citizens’ interests, which also shall include health care and education. Otherwise, if government failed to offer those services, it would be deemed as the breach of social contract.
There are many positive implications when it comes to governmental expenditure on healthcare and education sectors. From the health care perspective, investments in the installment of medical institutions with qualified medical practitioners as well as the provision of advanced medical technologies would ensure citizens’ basic health and the prevention of the outbreak of any epidemics. By having reliable health infrastructure, the workforce’s physical quality are improved, making significant contributions to the national development. From the educational perspective, as the monetary injections by official authorities grow, the number educational institutions with qualified personnel thus rise. This means that illiteracy rate would decline since individuals are outfitted with empirical knowledge and vocational skills, broadening their career prospects with remarkable productivity, increasing nations’ revenues though higher taxation.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that it is governments’ responsibility to provide budget for health care and education because of the aforementioned benefits related to national development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...emed as the breach of social contract. There are many positive implications whe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.37366548043 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64410031128 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619217081851 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6285918493 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.25 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246047969563 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973074486577 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875301388766 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163877729966 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621747952813 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.29 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.96 12.4159519038 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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