Arts display the beauty of countries culture and some time also represent it. In the past time, people were undergoing crafts. But now it changes the value of being artistry. This essay delves deep into the major possible reasons and solutions in the following paragraph with the optimum conclusion.
Undoubtedly, creativity attracted everyone's eyes and sometimes main sources of economic growth in numerous countries. In earlier times, the emperor wale to built a large palace, tower to attract others but modernistic people do not like this enough.
According to me, All by reason of competition because each person wants to snag profit in a short time period that's why they have a shortage of time for understanding the value of arts. Latest human gives the priority to technology. For instance, nowadays entirely world surrounding the automation, included, education, work, travel etc.
Now society is clench with robots and they relish it. Although there is an enormous reason to select the technology, its progressive and dynamic. Here I am not declining that entire humanity unfollow the arts but few people remain whom be obliged it.
- In some countries fast food restaurant and companies give money to school provided that the schools promote their school children products to school children What do you think is the positive and negative in the development of children 94
- People increasingly spend their leusure time using computers, for example, surfing the Internet or playing computer games. This has brought benefits but has also created new problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? 56
- Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion? 78
- The graphs below show unemployment rates and average earnings according to level of education 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...and some time also represent it. In the past time, people were undergoing crafts. But now...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...stic people do not like this enough. According to me, All by reason of competition because e...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...s to snag profit in a short time period thats why they have a shortage of time for un...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Latest'.
Suggestion: The Latest
...me for understanding the value of arts. Latest human gives the priority to technology....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26630434783 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70299993496 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.733695652174 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7092502456 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.75 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122759995984 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398468408018 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038938482269 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699086773435 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465854324622 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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