Some people think it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans. Other people think it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In recent years, more and more animals are being utilized for various human purposes. While some people hold a negative view of that phenomenon, I would argue that we should make use of animals for our goals.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people consider exploiting animals as inhumane. Firstly, the fear of animal extinction is a possible reason. To illustrate, these days, there are many people hunting elephants illegally because of a huge amount of money from the tusks. As a result, it is inevitable that elephants will soon be on the brink of extinction. The following reason should be keeping animals for entertainment. In the circus, during the training process, many animals are tortured severely in many ways such as skipping meals and violence since they could not meet the expectation of the owner. Therefore, some people find it unacceptable and desire to free them.
At the other hand, using animal effectively could be beneficial to human being. Animals play a crucial role in maintaining our health. Animal meats are widely believed to contain a number of nutritious vitamins benefiting human body. Without those substances, our body will be at risk of lacking energy. The animals also contribute significantly to medical aspect. For example, mice are often samples in the laboratory to test some new kinds of medicines before giving them to us. Thanks to the mice, human is able to tackle several disadvantages of that medicine.
All in all, some people suggest exploiting animals should be abandoned for culminating in extinction and stealing their freedom. However, I fully support taking advantage of animals for the food supply and samples in experiments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12589928058 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74056577952 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5837608688 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1666666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369757994309 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108923279167 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669393233461 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234010278326 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375697159126 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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