Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people believe that horizontal city is an ideal place to live, while the opponents think that vertical city deserves to reside. I would argue that residents are more likely to be satisfied their lives by living in low-rise construction.
First of all, a vertical city could benefit residents in some ways. Firstly, high-rise apartments provide a numerous of accommodations so that the cost of living can be reduced since the people who live inside can manage together to pay for the landlord. Apparently, it could be a considerably lower fee than paying for a house. Secondly, citizens in skyscrapers may not have a worry about the safety of surroundings due to the fact that this type of building structure is unlikely to attract criminals. Offenders are often unable to either access or escape from the construction as every high building usually has security protecting facilities.
However, I firmly believe that horizontal city is the best place to live. One of the reasons is that living in lower the ground is safer for inhabitants when emergencies occur. For example, when a fire burns their home they can as quickly escape as possible from the dangerous area because the construction is not too high, it will not take much time to exit. Moreover, they do not have to wait for the elevator or going downstairs when the power off. Another reason is that occupant has larger space to settle other constructions needed such as a garden, a small farm for planting vegetables. It could be a tranquil environment that may lead to a positive effect on their health.
In conclusion, although both horizontal and vertical city also has its advantages, it seems to me that low-rise offers more benefits to inhabitants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96896551724 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8183385362 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610344827586 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1927117974 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204117210373 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691296208782 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921769389651 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135439041627 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806016678743 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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