Some think that it is the best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some suppose that living in a horizontal city is the best while others prefer to settle in a vertical city. While there are many advantages to residents for dwelling in a city with low-rise construction, I strongly believe that skyscrapers and high-rise buildings offer more benefits.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why residents prefer to live in a horizontal city. The first reason is that it is easier to escape from a private house lower to the ground in case of emergencies such as fire. For example, when a fire is detected in the home, inhabitants can run quickly to safe area outside such home because it is not high off the ground, it does not take too much time to leave. Another reason is that residents can be freer to design or change their own house architecture as they want. A person cannot have right to change an apartment design and structure in a building though he buys and owns such apartment, because his apartment has structural relation to others in the same building.
On the other hand, I firmly believe that living a vertical city is more conducive to residents. Firstly, a city with many skyscrapers and high-rise buildings will have more space for public usage because the huge number of inhabitants live in buildings. Consequently, the government will take advantage of unused land next to such buildings so as to build public constructions such as hospitals, schools, roads and overpasses. Secondly, it is much convenient for residents to live an apartment in a tall building which offers the amount of goods and services because there are many shopping center in lower floors.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that living in a horizontal city are beneficial for residents, but I argue that the best choice is to settle in a city with various skyscrapers and high buildings.
- Some believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that it is a result of person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to import movies and TV programs. Others suppose that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch TV regularly both in school and at home. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing of their country. What are reasons? Solution to change negative attitudes. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...e of unused land next to such buildings so as to build public constructions such as hosp...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'centers'?
Suggestion: centers
...ervices because there are many shopping center in lower floors. In conclusion, it i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arious skyscrapers and high buildings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85942492013 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78201572781 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507987220447 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4286064838 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17861055078 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904618490981 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122488218833 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139646793293 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793380753427 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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