Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports are playing an important role in developing people’s health and entertainment. Some people argue that team sports are more overbenefical than the opposed ones on the individual sports. In my opinion, I believe that both types of sport are on the same merits to participants.
On the one hand, people who are interested in individual sports are more likely to get an opportunity to learn how to control themselves and build up their confidence. The fact is that people need to have a strong mindset when they are competing in a competition because there is no one else for them to rely on. Therefore, in case of unexpected things happening, they have to remain calm and cope with the problems, and individual sports also provide a good chance for people to challenge themselves by setting goals. As a result, they are becoming more and more independent when obtaining their biggest achievements.
On the other hand, team-sports are not only creating a dynamic environment for people to make friends and strengthen relationships, but also enhance interpersonal skills like communication, and teamwork. When playing multiplayers-sports like soccer, participants need to communicate and work with teammates well in order to get the most optimal result. This could be very beneficial either in their daily or officer life because they are developing their communicating and collaborating skills through sports over time, then they can easily get along well with the workflow and working culture in the company. As a result, they can make good relationships from that.
In conclusion, on balance, I believe that both types of sports are giving the same benefits to those playing them. Therefore, it is unclear to assume that there are more merits of team-sports than individual sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21379310345 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07868279507 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555172413793 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4263731471 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265214813813 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105095350838 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059181919636 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182822611542 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531434371511 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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