Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
People have different views about whether it is more beneficial to participate in team sports, or take part in individual sports. In my opinion, although both kinds of sports have their own merits, it is better to take part in individual sports
On the one hand, team sports such as football or basketball is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, those sports help players to improve their interpersonal skills including teamwork and communication skills, which are not only useful in day- to day social interation but also benefit them in their potential workplace. Furthermore, playing in teams is one of the best ways to develop a sense of unity, friendship , and sportsman among teammates. It is undeniable that people who join in team sports always have a feeling of being a part of a large community when they are likely to support other teammates in almost situations to achieve the common goal.
On the other hand, individual sports like tennis or swimming has it own merits, which are really essential to the players. The first one is that individual sports can enhance personal skills such as managing emotions, coping with stress, building self- esteem and confidence. Playing sports individually means that players have to deal with any difficulties by themselves without any supports from other people. As a result, players have an opportunity to develop a strong mindset to overcome and deal with any setbacks that they may face in the future. Moreover, individual sports provides a better opportunity to challenge themselves by setting clear goals and achieving their bests to pursue their ambitions.
In conclusion, it seems to me that all sports offer great benefits for people in terms of physical and mental health, however, playing individual sports would be a better choice due to its significant benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14765100671 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76538679454 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.8356602966 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.454545455 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301874826995 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115501135103 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994041746244 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195403228708 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114397641153 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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