Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is irrefutable that in this ultramodern era, the awareness regarding the sports has been surging among the people. Section of society believes that participation in group games has more advantages whereas other averse that individual sports are more beneficial than team sports. The following paragraphs will analyze the impact of the reasons and propose a logical conclusion.
To commence, the first and foremost benefit of team sport is, people can learn various skills from other group members such as leadership, communication as well as social by which it would help to enhance the knowledge about not only in societal, but also professional life. As a consequence, it leads to the holistic development of individuals. Moreover, it is become easy to win any tournament and games because team members can motivate each other and understands the gravity of the situation regarding matches due to which soar the confidence of players. As a ramification, team sports would reduce the stress and anxiety of players.
Conversely, discussing the merits of taking part in a single-player game, to begin with, it assists to improve metal development of atheists because in this game an individual has to take decisions by own experience without taking advice from the other. Therefore, the player becomes mentally strong as well as rise self-confidence skills. Furthermore, sportspeople become self-dependent because the person has to play an individual, who cannot negate one mistake. So the credit of the win the match on the player head.
In the final analysis, the reflection exhibited to above statement leads to firmly assert that either play in a team or individual in sports, any person can be succeeded in their life by continuous hard work. If they will not act judiciously according to the sport then they will pay for it in the years to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, as to, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16887417219 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97559809568 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2769668597 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168285358342 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044517977935 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556613930151 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896718248551 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299155051568 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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