Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that each gender has distinct individual characteristics, which set one apart from the other. While it is argued that some jobs are compatible with men and women due to their respective personality and skill sets, I partly agree with this statement as each sex can perform equally or even more effectively than the other, irrespectively of conventional thoughts.
It is undeniable that both genders have a quite separate set of characteristics, which enables them to perform certain tasks well. Women are good at taking care of household activities and do children rearing as they are naturally loving, patient, kind-hearted and meticulous. We cannot deny that without their help, our children could have developed as they are born to be a mother. In contrast, men possess some special traits such as strength, self-confident, which high qualifies them for areas like being the breadwinner or making the important decisions for the whole family. As we can observe from real-life experience, men are usually CEOs of corporation as such work is extremely stressful and require stamina and decisiveness.
Though not having standard deemed suitable for certain types of job, each other still renders equally satisfactory performance or even outshines the other in some field. The first reason for this is that as our world is changing rapidly, there are many technical breakthroughs, cutting-edge equipments or alternative treatment released, which helps women boost their self-esteem and do the jobs being long-established for men. For example, the military is traditional exclusive to men because they are physically robust is no more rational nowadays as these modern inventions can train women professionally to carry out the current missions and give them the best treatment when being injured. Another reason explaining for this is that there are more and more people joining the elite compared to the past so the equality between men and women is being gradually established. For instance, many male parents take the role as housewife because their spouse is busy with her business, even better than their wife.
In conclusion, both men and women are blessed with individual qualities, giving them an advantage in some certain areas. Yet, by looking at the current situation, it is unreasonable to believe that they cannot do each other’s job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ivities and do children rearing as they are naturally loving, patient, kind-hearted and meticulous. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, still, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31034482759 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98348947788 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583554376658 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0337452991 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9285714286 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326629464605 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102674205531 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738065773505 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196816149635 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593527869796 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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